雅思写作真题范文:全球化给所有人都带来好处吗?
雅思写作真题范文解析与审题,2021年第一考,重复的是2012年2月9日的原题。2020年最后几次考试都在重复2014年之前的旧题,2021年第一次考试延续了这种做法。
The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase in globalization produce positive effects to everyone. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? (2021/1/9)
雅思写作真题范文解析与审题
2021年第一考,重复的是2012年2月9日的原题。2020年最后几次考试都在重复2014年之前的旧题,2021年第一次考试延续了这种做法。
本题首先需要认识两个词:multinational 跨国的;globalization 全球化
跨国公司的扩张,造成了全球化。这个是什么意思?我们首先得明白。这类抽象的概念,需要结合到实际生活来思考。如果我们想想麦当劳,肯德基,想想大众、奔驰,我们就能明白全球化的意思:我们生活在地球村,使用同样的产品,吃同样的东西,开同样的车,甚至看同样的电影,等等。这就是全球化。
那么,全球化是不是对所有人都有利呢?
题目中有个everyone,是非常绝对的词汇。遇到这种绝对含义的题目,我们的基本写作策略肯定就是不同意,因为无论你写多少全球化的好处,都无法富有逻辑地证明“对所有人有利”,反之,你只需举出一个反例,就很convincingly证明“不是对所有人都有利”。
因此,本文的基本写作结构是:
1. 引入话题
2. 全球化的好处
3. 全球化的坏处
4. 结论:全球化能带来很多好处,但不是对所有人都有利。
The positive effects of globalization:
(1) global competition leads to products of high quality and high customer satisfaction level;
(2) it makes domestic companies more competitive;
(3) it brings together various cultures.
The negative effects of globalization:
(1) it leads to job insecurity;
(2) It worsens the environment by consuming more natural resources such as fossil fuels;
(3) it results in loss of local culture.
高分范文
As companies keep moving across borders, globalization has become a reality since 1960s, but I do not think globalization benefits everyone, though it is beneficial to many of us.
Globalization leads to competition at a global level, which enables us to enjoy products of higher quality and lower prices....
本段参考词汇:
At a global level 在全球层次上
Devastating 毁灭性的
Eventually 最终地;最后地
It may turn out a blessing rather than a curse 其结果可能是好事而非坏事
Compel 迫使
But globalization may also impact us negatively in multiple ways. Firstly, it leads to job insecurity....
本段参考词汇:
In multiple ways 在多方面;以多种方式
Job insecurity 工作不稳定
Outsource 外包
Globalization also produces negative effects on the natural environment we live in....
本段参考词汇:
Utilization 使用(n.)
Call for 要求
Humanity 人类
Finally, globalization may lead to loss of local culture....
本段参考词汇:
Ideally 理想地
In reality 实际上
Domination 统治;控制
To conclude, despite the benefits globalization brings to us, it is by no means something that benefits us all.
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